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finnally!

thank god, something decent for clockday!

well done on it, i really like it. very dark and saddening, keep it up clock crew!

oh and think about getting rid of some of the more annoying members of the crew, if you check out the portal atm, every other anim submitted is a pile of shit that just says "happy clockday".

jesus give it up!!

happy fucking clock day, time to spam the portal with shit once again. woo.

for fuck sake

for fuck sake, give it up with the whole "omg its clockday so i must submit a piece of shit"!!

this is like the 5th thing that i have seen that is just pure shit hoping to get somewhere because it says "clock day"

yea great happy fucking clock day, its time to spam the portal with shit once again >8(

AUb responds:

You are a very sad and lonely person, aren't you?

just a few things

ok well ill admit that i got bored half way through and X'ed it, sorry but 10 mins is far to long for a internet flash.

also the only thing i didnt like about the sound was that after the tank scene (taking out the watch tower thing) the music turned to like the opera song, i thought that music really didnt fit it, its normally used to celebrate stuff, not in the middle of a war.

i loved the menu, real nice idea.

and the art, 0.0 WOW! now that was something to be truley proud of! (although i think you traced some of it =/ )

I gave you a 4 just on the bases that its not quite perfect. keep it up though, you obviosly have talent!

meh

nothing to amazing, random squigles turning into more random squigles. admitedly it was just a test so yea, ill le you off based on that =P

but it was way to jumpy, even for fbf. i mean like a line would jump around where you have re-drawn it, you need to practise on that.

but it looked so promising!

i was watching the start little intro (not the menu, that should be scrapped asap) and it looked like it was going to be really cool, i loved the idea of echo-ey voices, really good.

and then it was sticks.

nothing wrong with sticks, but you have to be able to make them sing and dance (be dam good at animating) to use them well. this however, ruined it.

keep it up though

nice

that was pretty sweet my friend, pretty dam sweet. but youve kind of screwd yourself for the next chapter (if there is one?), he cant really come back to life now can he?

oh, and where was the sad music at the end when he gets stabbed then he kills the clown?? im afraid that is amust for all madnes films, so i only game you a 9 on sound =)

wow, just wow

truly stunning, the backgrounds, if a little sketchy, were very nice, the animation was farly smooth, the music fits nicely, what more can i say, one of if not the best stick figure movies out there, id say a match for the xiaos.

straight into my faveroutes =)

well i liked it

even if no one else did.

But Kantir had a point when he said why are you apolligising? This is your movie and if this is how you feel about that cartoon then if people dont like it they dont have to watch it. There is no need to apolligise to the people you offend, people get offended every day on this site, do you really think that just because someone didnt like your movie, they expect you to give your life up for them, become there eternal slave just as a way to apollagise? NO! They get pissed off a bit, write a bad review and life continues, the world carrys on rolling. Oh, and the people that write those review are generally newbs that cant animate for shit anyway.

And now onto the movie =)

I think the car explosion needed a far bit of work, and the smoke cloud from the ciggerette as well. Some of the animation was a bit strange, like the walk loops, you had only animated one step, so it jumped, and when the bloke called over the other people, his hand looked all wrong.

But apart from that, it made me laughed and i liked it alot. Keep it up!

one thing ruined it,

the rain!!

ugh, it had such stunning graphics that it seemed a shame to waste them on the rain, still, made me chuckle and i watched it twice, just to be sure it was that funny and cool.

Now call me strange, but i think this could be the begining of a promising series...

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